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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby lookatyouhacker » Sun Sep 22, 2019 6:10 +0000

So, in the chapter you just posted a link to, what was it that Tomoe really hated being called? Was it the "flower" comment that offended her?
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Sun Sep 22, 2019 13:31 +0000

Tomoe is referred to by many as "The Flower of the Nation"

She takes some offense at that, as she doesn't appreciate being 'plucked'.

She is further offended by Yasuhira, as he insinuated that her honour has been co-opted by the Shogun. Whereupon she nearly slew her guest for that affront.

Cooler heads prevailed.

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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby lookatyouhacker » Sun Sep 22, 2019 16:08 +0000

I understand Tomoe's disdain for the idea of being "plucked" or for the idea of the whole thing with the shogun, but that does seem like an overreaction.
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Mon Sep 23, 2019 8:50 +0000

Remember only yesterday (albeit a few chapters ago) Hane made Tomoe question the very nature of her soul when she gets married.

Now, Yasu begins to question the very nature of being a samurai in the climate of the times. He even hints that it's not even a worth while endeavour, as the risk of being turned away from a Lord is very great.

It's one thing to become a Ronin if your lord is killed, like Usagi. It's a whole other matter to be turned away cuz you cost too much. And Tomoe confessed to Noriyuki that is what she feared the most, to be turned out and alone.

Add to all that spiritual quandary, Yusu further insinuated that her honour now belongs to the Shogun. Worse than being plucked, Tomoe's honour was bought!

Put all together, that would make any samurai a bit...jumpy. :)
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby lookatyouhacker » Mon Sep 23, 2019 12:44 +0000

But she still got married, right?
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Mon Sep 23, 2019 13:21 +0000

Not in my story.

She's still single. :D
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby lookatyouhacker » Tue Sep 24, 2019 5:00 +0000

You know, I hope that in the actual series, Horikawa gets actual development and depth. So far, he's appearing like the steriotypical trecherous advisor. Remember when he suggested to Noriyuki that he do nothing to try to help Tomoe? This makes me think he was hoping that she would get infected with the plague and die.
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Tue Sep 24, 2019 17:50 +0000

Horikawa does have a significant role to play in my series.

He's taken rather low, but then pulls himself back up again.
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby lookatyouhacker » Tue Sep 24, 2019 18:30 +0000

Meaning?
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Wed Sep 25, 2019 8:45 +0000

You'll have to keep reading my story to find out what happens to Horikawa. :D
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby lookatyouhacker » Thu Sep 26, 2019 12:35 +0000

So, if you have finished all the chapters in your fic, why do you keep posting one new chapter each week and not all of them all at once?
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Thu Sep 26, 2019 13:28 +0000

lookatyouhacker wrote:So, if you have finished all the chapters in your fic, why do you keep posting one new chapter each week and not all of them all at once?


I've finished the book entirely. But I go chapter by chapter to allow people time to read them.

After a couple of days, I post the next installment.

Just like a comic. :D
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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Sun Sep 29, 2019 11:28 +0000

Chapter 17!

Well a new day has dawned. But everyone is still trying to come to grips about what happened the previous day and night.

What drama will this new day bring?

Only the Gods know!

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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Sun Oct 06, 2019 16:47 +0000

Chapter 18.

One of my favourite chapters, I must add.

Things are really moving now. Emotions are running wild.

Tomoe takes Yasuhira to visit the "Lover's Waterfall".

:D

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Re: My Usagi Fan Fiction is complete!

Postby estee » Mon Oct 14, 2019 13:42 +0000

Chapter 19.

The final meal with the Hikijis.

One more evening in their company.

What can all that lead to?

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