Heya Dojo, it's been a while but I thought I would share here first.
I finished up a comic book submission that I am sending to small publishers due to the nature of the material I want to get out, but also because I feel like my work might just fit in with the other oddities rather then at Marvel etc. I am looking for feedback if anyone has time or cares to check it out.
In this comic there are three stories. Two are ongoing and the third is a one-shot. This is Issue #1 and I am currently ordering proofs on Lulu so I at least have a basic copyright.
If you would like to take a look you will find the entire comic at O-File (
www.ofile.com)
Login: ComicEdit
Password: editor
Login/Password is case sensitive. The file should take about 15 minutes to download.
I work with rough kids so I like my feedback "down and dirty". Let me know:
Do the stories make sense?
Spelling mistakes?
Is the artwork any good?
Do the panels flow in a logical way?
Anything confusing?
What's god, bad, ugly?
You can email me if you'd like at
campfireyoung@gmail.com