morna learning to draw Usagi

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(Forgot to mention last time that this is big-ish - about 8" in either direction. I think it'll help make the inking a bit easier)

I might be done with the pencils.

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let's see... the neck is still kinda long and skinny but that seems to be how I draw him... Ha ha I just realized I've got his left and right mixed up - bummer. That sleeve is bugging me the um... his left one. The ears are a little floopy they need a bit more crispness - I may let 'em be tho'. Ya the crotch should be somewhere else - like 6 inches lower. Hmm he seems to've dropped his scabbards too - more bad form.
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Ok done

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ooooo I see SO many mistakes. Swords are really HARD 'cause you can't get away with anything, they have to be straight (well slightly curved but you know what I mean) or they look squishy as in the example above. The wakizashi looks ok but the katana is just awful, I lost most of my foreshortening and it looks like Usagi is gripping it so tight that it's distorting. That's what I get for not having the pencils tight enough! I lost my way halfway down there and ended up poking poor Usagi in the head afterall. sorry buddy. Now I notice that I've got him hitting with the blunt edge on top of everything else! Still not sure about the (his ) right sleeve. But the head - damn I made him slopey-headed again. It's just not a dynamic enough pose that a slopey head is warranted. sigh

Still, I couldn't have done anything like that a couple of days ago so - not too bad.
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This is really cool because you can see the progress you are making.

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yaay! I was hoping people would find it interesting. Thanks for the comment Mike.
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next step would be to put him in context


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I know I know I have LOTS of work to do on that background. Actually everything needs work. I need to figure out why the pencils look so much better than the inked ones. This thing looks like a kid did it. (sorry kids, no offence )

ah well practice, practice...
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well I was pretty discouraged today but I finally climbed back up on the pony and did this one. I think the idea is to flesh it out some more with textures and background stuff but I make no promises at this point - sigh

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you might recognise this pose from such stories as Demon Mask... except in the story his pants weren't falling off - that's probably why he looks so peeved - sigh - sorry again Usagi.
I had to fill in from the hips down as the panel only went that far and I wanted the whole figure. Hey at least the sword hilts are straight! Actually don't look at them. Why do I only notice these things when they get up on the screen. The waist band somehow got too low and now the swords are somehow hanging on his hip with no visible means of support.

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Very interesting work, facinating to watch you progress on a daily basis. By next week (or maybe next month) you will be putting out some fan art to rival the best out there.....
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oh Steve! You're such a sweety!
Ok I had to get out of bed and turn the computer back on - I just made one I actually am quite excited about!


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What took me so long! heh heh heh

edit: I added a tiny detail before I shut my eyes last night and made a better scan this morning
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morna-san, the progress you are making is really impressive.

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Thanks for saying so Mike, you're a sweety too!

Gary and I were just looking at this thread talking about where I go from here - and why, and trying to figure out why the pencils have so much more zing than the inked stuff. Obviously it's got a lot to do with line weight. I'm attempting to illustrate my point but I am in need of a lot of help with photoshop and can't seem to get it to do my bidding at the moment. For now let's just say that the tension points are way more poignant in the pencils. The ink does show a little of it but tends to have the same line weight no matter what.


Ah! now we have an illustration thanks to Gary.

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on this scale what strikes me first is the emphasis on the following points: leading edge of the head, upper eyelids, (his) left neck and shoulder and elbow on his kimono, centre where the kimono crosses, his right hand grip, waist band right side, sword tip and grip on his left hand. also de-emphasis on the other sword tip enhancing foreshortening. It's all little stuff but it adds up. I have also come to realize that the pencils have way more information and are thus more satisfying. Somehow Stan doesn't need all the extraneous stuff and flies his drawings on the stark inks alone. I'm in awe yet again.

some of this is pure familarity with the media - I know what pencils do - they're really responsive to pressure so I unconsciously use that when I draw with one. same with graphite or charcoal and conte. Ink markers are weird! They betray you if you rest in one spot... they insist you join your lines PRECISELY - gaaaah! all they know how to deal with pressure is to collapse and go all dry.. It's a different rhythm altogether if it even HAS a rhythm. Ok mystery at least partially solved.
Why does 'breakfast' work... more information - more lines more emphasis.. and mor me in it.
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Thank you for inviting me, morna.

Your sketches are a joy to look at and I eagerly await more.
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Welcome oh math god! I hope to entertain you with some deeply non mathematical stuff here. sit back and enjoy, I will try not to disappoint!
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Your thread is awesome; I admire your skill and your courage to let us all watch while you learn.

The little experience I had with inks is: they are unforgiving! You have to know exactly what you're doing, no second try....

A teacher once told me how to get better: First you've got to practise, then you' need to practise, and then, after you've practised a bit, you might want to practise a little, just for a change.... :wink:

Keep up the spirit, Morna-San, it's inspiring.

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wow thanks Thomas. You inspire me to keep going... and to divulge the very first ever really truly embarrassing Usagi fan art I just found in my other sketchbook. ulp! I will stick it onto the first page with the other scary stuff. I guess I may as well stick my skull balloon piece in there too so it's all together. I will post something new later - hopefully
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today's effort is a total self-indulgence! I love this panel from UY 101 and I shamelessly copied it - so shoot me!
I really wish I'd ruled out the panel better it drives me nuts that it's not 'square'. I think I can mitigate it a bit with heavier marker.

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cleaned up a bit - it wasn't so much off square as scanned crooked. I may actually go to the trouble of cleaning it up further in photoshop:


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cropped a bit for clarity but I wish I could figure out how to make an outline in this stupid program. It can practically put a man on the moon but can I figure out how to make a simple outline - no - sigh


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I honestly don't know how you draw such lovely straight lines Stan. They're obviously not ruled but they're all nice and architecturally pure - my shoji screen looks like a drunk carpenter made it. Is it practice or a gift - my guess is a bit of both. I also notice that my usagis look a bit feminine - they need to butch up a bit - god knows how I go about that one!

actually looking at it - a couple of my lines are pretty good - the two door frame ones are really not all that bad
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