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Haikus inspired by Usagi

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 23:16 -0700
by Lady Keiko_ronin Usagi
Usagi

A long-eared ronin
Wanders through the endless night
Going where his heart follows…


Here Comes Kistune!

The pretty vixen
Meets a rhino and rabbit.
Oh, here comes trouble!

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These are some of the few attempted haikus inspired by our long eared hero and friends. :wink: I did these last year, but I did'nt have the nerve to post them. I'm working on a couple more, plus a longer poem based on Usagi's thoughts and feelings on experiences of being a masterless samurai. They'll be posted up soon, possibly tonight or next week. (the haikus arent probably even right) I hope ya'll enjoy these!

Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 23:41 -0700
by Ca7nk
Love the first one, like narration to short story. Second one, that made me laugh alittle. :lol:

I'll go ahead and even give it a shot. Lets see...

No bath was taken
Zato Ino fallows you
Now, were is that soap?

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 11:38 -0700
by estee
My god, Lady Keiko, you avatar is positively hypnotic! :shock:

Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 23:56 -0700
by Lady Keiko_ronin Usagi
Thanks, estee. Thought it was cute.
Ca7nk, thanks for the positve feedback. Personally, I like the second one better. The one about Kitsune was inspired by "The Shrouded Moon" :lol:
Usagi's was, well, something I came up with while reading one of the older stories....